week 8: Revision plan!

So, I've come to realize that I still have a way to go on my paper. I spent too much time trying to find my argument and audience, while ignoring style almost altogether. I finding the proper style is most certainly at the top of my list of things to do. Next, I also need to focus my argument more on my audience. This is proving to be difficult, but I'm still not done with the paper yet either. I have the words down on the page, but I still need to find the write link in my thesis that puts it all together. When I have this understood, I can then get my transitions down, I might save this towards the end of my paper. I tend to move paragraphs around after writing a paper to see if things fit better in a different order.